Talk:Monster Girl Quest! Cecil’s Adventure/@comment-11551160-20130705095442

They need to put an alternative story where when Cecil has turned into a moth girl. She has a brother who is 15 and has joined the army and not to mention he LOATHES monsters. So when Cecil is raping Luka, a squad of army men burst in the scene and kill Satania (Took lots of men thought). Cecil escapes and decides to head to her homeland and maybe live a normal life their. She is however unaware of her brother joining the army until she arrives. The downside of being a monster, you need "Nutrients" from men, and needs it every night; Benefits are that she now can fly, is stronger, and is more sneaky. Once she arrives in her homeland to reunite with her family, she finds her brother in an officers uniform. Of course her parents were overjoyed including her brother. Her brother then tells her about his enlistment into the army. Cecil pretended to be happy, but instead is nervous for he is trained to detect a monster just by suspicoius behavior. She hopes not to be caught and adapt to her new life. One night however, deep in the woods where Cecil normally feeds, her brother was ordered to patrol the woods, that day was when her brother saw the moth monster but had no idea what it's face looked like. Cecil fled the scene as fast as she could with her fast brother chasing her down. She flew away and tried to circle around back to the village undetected. She was succesful, but has caused major suspicion throughout the kingdom. (JEEZ that was alot, I'll be sure to continue this some other day.)