Talk:War of the Goddesses/@comment-5463954-20121109075154/@comment-66.27.126.49-20121124092043

Well their reactions to hating him to that extent because of his father seems somewhat unrealistic but if you make Luka himself do something like kill a villager that was trying to butt rape him or something when he was unconsious with his unconscious state then the fear/hate might seem more realistic. Since he wasnt aware of doing the murder it would not necessarily make him good/bad but it would be enough to incur the hate of villagers.

Personally I kind of like the villagers extreme reaction if you want Luka to have a choice between two paths good and evil some sort of extreme setting is necessary because its too easy for Luka whose goal in life is to fufill his mothers desire to become a hero to simply go the "good" way.

Personally I think its fitting Luka who is suppose to be a regular boy is seems somewhat pathetic when dealing with the children and adults because there is not much he can do. He lacks the support of an adult and the children abuse their pariental authority to do whatever they want to Luka.

-If he had more mental strength in the beginning (like telling the bullies to stop, they all him names but run away since he is too powerful / willing to actually oppose them and does not fear their parents) Then if your goal was to reduce patheticness this may be one way.

On the herocomplex aspect if you going with the idea that Luka has nothing else to live for besides the dream of his mother a complex is rather fitting because that is all he has. If you want to lessen the complex perhaps you can have another one of his goals to be to leave the village in order avoid persecution.

If this blob of text was at all helpful feel free to reply and let me know in which case I may create another such blob. Anyways I found the story rather cool and what was released surpased my expectations for "just another mod".