User blog comment:Zepekinio25/Monster Girl Quest : Servant of the monster lord/@comment-71.254.90.221-20140414045848/@comment-178.40.6.190-20140420171111

You know that "A Wikia contributor" isn't an account but a "nickname" given to everyone who post comments without logging in?

I can tell that in this set of comments there are at least three "A Wikia contributor" who didn't log in. (Count me in and you have 2 others contributors) So it's surely not only ME who have something to say about this full patch and your English. (It's interesting you didn't even notice that you were talking with three "A Wikia contributor"s. You are really something you know that?)

I'm not questioning the full patch (game) itself. I'm questioning your PRESENTATION of it. Look at the comments in this set of comments:

I've seen stuff like this before.

In my nightmares.

The grammar alone tells me that this is gonna be crap. I mean holy hell I cringed reading this page. Cringed really hard.

I didn't write that, it was the "first contributor".

Yeah, this isn't something for people looking to find an immersive story, but rather something that you should just turn your brain off for and just... have an experience I suppose. Though I agree, grammar and proper syntax are critical in telling a good story, as people will usually be hung up on the mistakes made in grammar rather than what the substance of the narrative is trying to get across. I usually just pan stories that make this attempt, whether it is someone truly trying to make an effort at making a story or using it as practice to be better at english.

This wasn't me either, it was the "second contributor" and I'm the third one.

Clearly there are more people (than me) who are questioning your grammar. I'm not "the troll" but to be fair you are amusing me that's for sure. Althought, back to your comment.

I still think that Kain McBride is practically "making" this patch, because if he has to rewrite more than 5-10% (don't take the percentage too seriously) of your script he is practically "making" this full patch. There is a difference between "proof reading" and "correcting/rephrasing every (second) sentence".

And by the way, it doesn't matter how many posts/contributions/edits/modifications you made. If you don't know how to write in English you just don't and no amount of posts will change that. I'm not perfect either. English isn't my native language and I make many mistakes too, but at least when others are telling me that I said/wrote/did something badly I'm trying to correct it and make sure it won't happened again. However you are still defending that your English is good and everyone can understand it, but anyone who have at least some knowledge of English grammar can see that your English isn't as good as you think it is.