Talk:Saito Adventures/@comment-108.14.8.211-20130210114347

I can only speak for my self on your side story personally I like the set up it gives a new touch to things by that I mean its nice to see a character with a personality like Saito you rarely run into things like that made by fans unless you look really hard and even still the things that might cut down on the likes are things like grammer and H content though the lack of it can be made up for if you need help with grammer like said above there are programs and small stuff like that I would recommend something basic like a spell check (though its not spelling thats the problem) some of those have fixes for grammer mistakes but best I can say is google if you feel it can help out google things like "Grammer fixing program" but with all that aside I enjoy the story the grammer is no real problem for me hopefully this little wall of text helps out cause I have to say your story has small points that make a nice impact keep on going with the side storys if you can - From "That random encouragement person"