User blog comment:Zepekinio25/Monster Girl Quest : Servant of the monster lord/@comment-71.254.90.221-20140414045848/@comment-178.40.6.190-20140420145004

You are pretty funny guy, you know it?

Eithery way, you what me to give you an advices?

1. Don't present anything like this publicaly. It doesn't matter you are a Frenchman and it isn't an excuse for your poor English grammar. How you present your work is a big factor in how people will react on it. Presentation is one of the biggest factors in selling your ideas/products etc.

2. You should have learn English before trying to write this full patch. It doesn't matter you have Kain McBride to correct your script. In fact if he is correcting your script I could say that he is "writting" this full patch and not you. Because I can imagine he have to rephrase/correct at least every second sentence.

3. If people are telling you it "sucks" because of some flaws with your story or because of... your grammar. Maybe... just maybe... they are right.