Talk:War of the Goddesses/@comment-5463954-20121109075154

So I've been thinking about my story so far and I am not liking what I've wrote at all anymore. The villagers seem WAY too unrealistically mean and as a result lack depth and are too easy to hate. I would like feedback on the story I've written guys. One other thing, I feel like I've made Luka excednly pathethic, and has too much of a hero complex at the begining.