User blog comment:Yoush/CROSSOVER MGQ/MGE PART 1/@comment-10534118-20140614060659/@comment-95.103.82.63-20140614130726

No one is "trolling" him and I'm not a native english speaker either, but this?

How mutch time she have sex with her husbant ?Months ? Years ? Centurys ?Who care...

But something are wrong...Why some mamono in this world are so...ugly?Look at this parody of a lamia! And this...A suck vore?A roper girl?A kyoryuu?No human can have pleasure with this!And...no...NO! NO!Why this ugly mamono have eaten a human?He don't capture the human for sex,he have really eaten the human...ALIVE!This is insane!This is a world of insanity!!!This is a parody of her ideals!

Tamano go out of the room and go find the others heavenly knights.She said to Granberia,Erubetie and Alma Elma what happen.Granberia convince the others that she should punish the culprit who created these unknown monsters...Maybe an angel could have tried to create new chimeras...

The inconsistency of the text and how he presents his fanfic to us. It doesn't matter he can't write properly in english. One thing is being bad at english but not knowing how to use punctuation... This is just unacceptable, but that's just my opinion.