User blog comment:Zepekinio25/Monster Girl Quest : Servant of the monster lord/@comment-24431359-20140527100450

Yo.

From playing the game, this are the things I've noticed:

1.) You forgot to place an instructions notes, giving difficulty for those who do not know how to install properly.

2.) In-game: The hp bar would randomly warp back into the original one (the version without the ero-hp bar.)

3.) The grammar and spelling of most lines in the game needs a little fix. (''You could try finding a beta-reader of sorts, and have them do the editing of lines and phrases for the spelling and grammar. I'm available myself, but it might take a while due to my schedules in real life, since I have summer classes.'')

4.) For a trial patch, it came to an end a little too fast in my opinion.

So far, good work. I actually got engrossed while testing the full patch out. I really liked how the MC's individual choices affect his situation. It reminds me of the old RPG's from the golden age of PlayStation one, where your in-game choices from the start of the game actually affect your ending. In short, I like it.

A job well done, albeit needing a little more work. I shall wait for the full patch if you are indeed going through with this side story.