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For anyone adding text to this page in future, I'd suggest not making sentences too long. If a sentence already has multiple things happening in it, consider ending it and starting a new one.

Something to note too is the capitalisation of race names like "pegasus" and "orc". I think either capitalising or not capitalising is fine, but it should be consistent throughout the page.