User blog comment:79568567DOMFV/Monster Girl Origins/@comment-4878757-20131208222309

Another idea? Will this go anywhere? Will it be made into anything? You've honestly changed so much that it's not even really MGQ related anymore, you may as well take out the few MGQ bits and make it all your own thing. Anyone with a keyboard can say "please look at my ideas" and write up what they have in mind, but just saying you have an idea achieves nothing.

If this is something you want to develop and have some serious critique on, I'd suggest signing up to the Monstergirlunlimited forums who have a sub-forum dedicated to  people with their own monster girl ideas from worlds, monsters to whole stories.