Talk:Saito Adventures/@comment-88.83.46.101-20130202131756

Tested your side story and I can see why so many people dislike it.

It is most likley due to the fact that you have grammar errors everywhere.

Because then it doesn't matter how good the story is, people playing it will just be annoyed from all the grammar mistakes.

If you want your story to be liked then you better use correct grammar, if you can't do that by yourself ask a friend or use some kind of program to help you.