Talk:Alice/@comment-2037710-20130711084449/@comment-4878757-20130711133944

Vostan, even a page for the bios wouldn't solve a length problem.

I'd say the bio could be cut down, a lot of it seems to be a litle too in depth and bits like "Alics did not defend Luka from XXXXX" are redundant. Remember that Alice is pretty much present throughout the whole story and some bits can really be glossed over.

I mean, Jesus Christ, that bit about the Monster Lord's Castle as an example. Somehow is has more information than the game has itself, way too much waffle and conjecture. All you really need is:

"On arrival to the Monster Lord's Castle, Alice leave's Luka's side, only to appear to everyone's surprise as his final challenge after defeating the Four Heavenly Knights. Although Tamamo tries to deter Luka from the battle, Luka enters the final chamber to battle the Monster Lord herself. The Hero unfortunately, soon finds that the battle is all too real as Alice's personal issues reveal that she believes her own death will solve the problems between humans and monsters, requesting Luka to use his Iron Sword.

Luka has three choices during the battle, he may follow Alice's wishes and kill her, he may lose the battle or he can achieve the true ending by weakening Alice enough to begin her dialogue and not harming Alice for two more turns.

This results in the Hero explaining the futility of her death, the strength of their friendship and that another way must be found to make peace between humans and monsters."