English Translation Inconsistencies

This page serves as a list of inconsistencies and errors between Rogue’s translation of Monster Girl Quest. This article is not meant in order to downplay Rogue’s translation ability, but instead point out various inconsistencies and errors within the translation which will hopefully be fixed by later patches of the game.

Do not post errors or inconsistencies in the comment section.

Concentrate Magic/Magic Concentration
In the first Alice battle, she uses “Concentrate Magic”, but in the second battle, it says “Magic Concentration”.

“She me your power!”
Granberia says this when Luka uses Guard while in Serene Mind during their third battle. The grammar should read “show.”

“He let out quite a lot, didn't it? Hehe.”
Beelzebub A says this if the player loses to Triple Breast Crush. “it” should be “he”.

Colosseum/Coliseum
Both spellings are used.

Five Step Vaginal Hell: Fifth .@Prison
There is a “.@” between Fifth and Prison.

“Its come to this because you were unwilling to look at humans as equals.”
Upon defeating Queen Elf. “Its” should be “It's”.

“Beelzebub A is saled in the shape of a fly!”
Upon defeating Beelzebub. The grammar should read “sealed”.

“Ilias re-creates world and it becomes peace.”
End of Alice vaginal rape scene. “peace” should be “peaceful”.

“...My, you are quiet the violent one.”
At the beginning of the Alra Priestess. “quiet” should be “quite”.

“Quadrule Gig was learned”
At the camp when Alice teaches Quadruple Giga to Luka, this is what it shows up as.

“Black Alice
After Sara (Succubization) is defeated, one of the dialogue texts where the characters mention Black Alice lacks the second pair of quotation marks.

Giganto Weapon’s Monsterpedia Entry
The entry reads “Discovered unmoving in an unused portion portion of the castle her creator is unknown”. Portion should not be used twice.

Poseidon/Poseidoness
Before meeting her, she’s always referred to as Poseidon, but when met, her name changes to Poseidoness.

Imp’s Fellatio
Her fellatio attack is spelt as “felllatio”, with one l too many.

Royal Tit Fuck / Queen Tit Fuck
Queen Harpy’s Royal Tit Fuck is called Queen Tit Fuck when receiving it in a fight.

Petrifying Sucking / Petrifying Lick
Basilisk’s Petrifying Sucking is called Petrifying Lick when receiving it in a fight.

噂では、五代連続で魔王の教育係を務めたとか……
After the Nabe fight, this phrase was translated as “There are even rumors that she was in charge of the fifth Monster Lord’s training.”, but it should be “Rumor has it that she was in charge of the Monster Lord's training for five generations straight.”.

Ant Girl
The group of ant girls is just called “Ant Girl” in singular.

Sea CucumberSuck
An attack of Sea Cucumber Girl seems to have been mistyped.

Jewel of Friendship
Its description is missing periods at the end of the first two lines.

Four Animists and their Sources
Its description says “checked out a while” instead of “checked out for a while”.

Golem Girl’s Monsterpedia Entry
The last line says “either the King nor the citizens knowledge” which is grammatically incorrect and should be “neither the king’s nor the citizens’ knowledge”.