User blog comment:Zepekinio25/Monster Girl Quest : Servant of the monster lord/@comment-71.254.90.221-20140414045848/@comment-184.8.105.210-20140414122547

I do not know if you were directing your question to the first poster, or me (the second poster) or both, but I will respond, regardless. It is not that I would find your story good/bad in any sense of its substance regardless of proper grammar or otherwise. It is that I find the story that it is being based on to be in and of itself flawed in my point of view. The original MGQ story is, for what it is worth, exceptional given that this is first and foremost, a HENTAI GAME. On its own, as a story, it isn't much, the characters are unbelievably shallow and flawed when looked at with a critical eye, and the story itself leaves much to be desired for anyone with a relatively balanced moral compass, although given the fact that there is a story, and that there is character progression is something unique to the eroge game genre. I do not find your story/mod good or bad in any way, as I have not viewed it, nor do I have a desire to, as I would be unfairly biased towards disliking it either way given that the source it draws upon had already earned my ire. I will not say that you should feel disheartened by my dismissal as it is your passion to write this story, and I am aware that although it may look simple, coding and writing for this takes a great investment of effort and time which I find admirable, even more so now that you have admitted your desire to help further improve its content by having an editor look at and perform corrections to grammar and syntax. I wish you luck in seeing this story come to its full realization and potential.