User blog comment:Zepekinio25/Monster Girl Quest : Servant of the monster lord/@comment-71.254.90.221-20140414045848/@comment-184.8.105.210-20140416105606

Its me, the 2nd poster, and wow that is quite a bit of writing, so I will keep this short. I can definitely see both of your points of view, and I don't have much to really add to them without going far too much in depth, which I might if I am pressed, but at the this point I think you have spoken well enough for me on the matter.

As for the subject of that AU premise, I can see it holding true somewhat for 3 out of the 4 knights, but it is incredibly difficult to reconcile the Alma Elma that is known with being someone to 'raise' anything. It seems out of place for her as she seems to prefer doing as she wants, whenever she wants, to be free like the wind that is her element, and 'raising' another would be something that can be seen as a restriction of said freedom. I can buy that she carried out the job she was given to do in part 3 of the trilogy because she was faced with extermination by enemy forces, but I don't think she'd do anything of the sort willingly, or at the very least, what little she would have done would be seen as frivelous, and for her personal entertainment. Succubi in that world don't seem to care much for attachments of any kind, and appears to just be somthing they are compelled to be by their nature, as new born succubi in the game come out ready to rape anything and everything, while mature ones have more control over the temptation but only so far as they can see for getting themselves the most out of their efforts like with the succubus mayor and the succubus witch in their initial plan.

That is just my interpreation of her based on the personality we have seen from her and fellow succubi. Though your premise sounds appealing, it will require quite a lot of backstory to reconcile plotholes inherent in the game, as well as those that would be created by your balancing of power on the human and monsters side as well as how that would affect the histories of both parties for quite a ways back. One would suspect that the common monster in that world would not be the sadistic hunter that we had seen in MGQ but more of the cautious predator, that would be well aware that her prey can end her just as easily as she could end him.