Talk:Chapter 3/@comment-11127332-20131214022907/@comment-11127332-20131215022607

There is a limit to how incompetent a person can be. Sinceraly, I always thought that the dumbest character ever made in a fiction was Gaury from Slayers, but now, Eden takes the cake. I know Illias plan require losing, but Eden didn't knew that, so it never was intentional. Eden could be a good general and so the plot goes on, they did like this because was easier, call her incompetent and blame her for the losing. Easy way. In a good plot like Death Note, there is no space dumbness, even if I didn't like the ending of the anime (changed in the movie), I see no inconsistences on it.

Flaw in a plot I understand, most of them are forgivable, because the story is so good that makes you neither see them. But dumbness beyond limit is something I don't forgive, and I always thought that it just make the story boring. What would be of Lord of the Ring if Salron makes mistake after mistake?